In room 11 we have been doing some persuasive writing about some of the best seasons it was summer or winter but i think winter is the best.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, September 28, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!
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I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at this post Annalise but can't quite read the text.When I enlarge it,it's just blurry.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to checking out your dance post.
Have a great holiday.