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Monday, June 14, 2021

My describing writing

In writing we have been describing a alien spacesship or a treehouse.


I am out walking with my friend Alysha. We always go on this walk. Today there was an alien spaceship right there.

On the outside it is a big round circle. There are not many windows. It is nice and modern on the outside. The door was open and me and Alysha run inside. 

The inside is not that modern but there were heaps of windows and more buttons than the outside.

There are a lot more aliens in the spaceship. They


There was only one room and that was the main room. There are heaps of plans and that is where they sleep. 


I could not see many seats, some buttons and one lever. There was another spaceship connected to our one. When we look outside we could see the stars  and it was  really dark


1 comment:

  1. You have some good ideas Annalise.I like the way you described what it looks like in a spaceship.The reason I say is,if one ever lands on my lawn I won't need to go inside to see what it looks like.

    Were the aliens scary and do you know why they came to Earth?.

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