Persson: My friend-Alysha
Six simile
She is as beautiful as flower
She is as funny as a clown.
She is as busy as a household.
She is as fun as a toy
She is as fast as a cheetah.
She is as happy as a rainbow.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Persson: My friend-Alysha
Six simile
She is as beautiful as flower
She is as funny as a clown.
She is as busy as a household.
She is as fun as a toy
She is as fast as a cheetah.
She is as happy as a rainbow.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!
I like the enthusiasm i your voice Annalise.
ReplyDeleteIt made listening to your learning enjoyable.
I like the way you described your friend.Has she read it?.
thank you and yes i have show alysha
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