Tittle: Owl Diaries.
Lucy and Eva were best friends and the teacher said there's going to be a new student coming into the classroom and her name is Haley and we're doing a project who can make the best Forest drawing.
Then Hayley came into the classroom and the teacher said you can sit where ever you like Hayley and Eva put her wings up as high as she could and Hayley didn't see Eva and the principal walk in the door and said the person that won the movie ticket is Eva gratulations Eva now you are going to Wonderland and its exciting the movie I wish I could come the principal said. The next day...
Eva was happy but then Eva remembered that she do not have someone to go with her it really look like Hailey is Lucy’s new best friend when Eva got home she made puppets of her and Lucy and even there pet’s little Baxter and Lucy pet Rex and Eva was playing with them the next day…..Eva flew to school super early tonight miss Featherbottom was the only owl there hello Eva hi has the owl times been printed yet no not yet i was just about to print it and why? Said miss Featherbottom may i add something to it Eva said sure Eva then maybe you could help me pass out the newspapers said miss Featherbottom.I’d love to help said Eva. Eva placed a newspaper on each desk when everyone read it Eva said a bit sorry to Lucy, then Eva and Lucy are best friends’ and they had a sleepover with Hailey and everyone got to go to the movies.
Hi Annalise
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story about the owls. Do you like owls? Next time read your story out loud to yourself and you may be able to see other places that you can put punctuation, like full stops. Good work, my friend!
Hi Annalise
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story. Yes I agree with Petra, stories definitely need punctuation. Keep up the good stories on your blog.